Collaborative Selection of Hardy's Poetry
My
hope is that this page will start a conversation about putting together the best possible selection of
Hardy's poetry, a list that one could recommend to someone
who has never read the poems. Ideally, it would
demonstrate the wide range of virtues in the poetry -- metrical,
melodic, thematic, ethical and emotive -- and in that way give
newcomers a sense of quite how valuable time spent with Hardy's poetry
can be.
I
would like to suggest working by way of smaller lists. Each list
would focus on a specific aspect of Hardy's craft, and each list would
consist of between five and ten poems accompanied by a
brief description of why each poem matters.
Please send (1) suggestions
for ways to focus these smaller lists and (2) your own choice of poems in response to the selection that follows to my email address.
"I think that to
transfuse emotion . . . is the peculiar function of poetry."
Following this formula of A.E. Housman, I want to start by identifying a set of Hardy's poems that have a consistent and profound emotional charge for me. A little later in his Cambridge lecture of May 1933 (published that year as The Name and Nature of Poetry), Housman says:
Experience
has taught me, when I am shaving of a morning, to keep watch over my
thoughts, because, if a line of poetry strays into my memory, my skin
bristles so that the razor ceases to act. This particular symptom
is accompanied by a shiver down the spine; there is another which
consists in a constriction of the throat and a precipitation of water
to the eyes; and there is a third which I can only describe by
borrowing a phrase from one of Keats's last letters, where he says,
speaking of Fanny Brawne, 'everything that reminds me of her goes
through me like a spear.'
Here are five poems
of Thomas Hardy that consistently send a shiver down my spine. As always, numbers refer to Gibson's edition:
The Going (277)
The first of two poems here from the Poems of 1912-13, the series that grew from the death of Hardy's first wife Emma. Under the epigraph Veteris vestigia flammae ("Traces of an old flame"), taken from the mouth of passion-struck Dido in Vergil's Aeneid,
Hardy sets the ashes of his marriage and the present 'blankness'
of his surroundings against the recollection of the relationship's early fire. "The
Going" opens the sequence with the propulsive line "Why did
you give no hint that night . . .", a driving rhythm later picked up in
the picture of Emma's youth in Cornwall: "You were the
swan-necked one who rode / Along the beetling Beeny Crest . . ."
Angry remonstrance alternates throughout the poem
with the inertia of grief -- "Till in darkening dankness / The
yawning blankness / Of the perspective sickens me!" -- until in the
last
stanza the monosyllabic resignation of "It must go" crashes against the
final shout of misery: "O you could not know / That such swift
fleeing / No soul foreseeing -- / Not even I -- would undo me so!" Such
'undoing' pulls against the contrary act of stitching together -- an
act that enables the production of this taut poem -- to powerful effect.
At Castle Boterel (292)
This second piece from the Poems of 1912-13
elaborates another vivid scene of the poet engaged with the past, here as
he visits the Cornish landscape visualized in "The Going."
Some years ago I took part in an event at the University of
Southern California in which students, faculty and staff read and
commented upon a favorite poem. Here is what I said that day in Los Angeles.
During Wind and Rain (441)
Hardy's command of images is evident in this extraordinary poem, along with his
manipulation of a tightly controlled narrative and poetic structure.
As Dennis Taylor points out (Hardy's Poetry 1860-1928,
pp. 31-3) the poem places the poet's
reminiscence of the progression of familial life -- communal song, work
in the garden, a summer breakfast, moving house -- against his
experience of the progression of a storm in a graveyard; the two scenes
coalesce in the devastating final line "Down their carved names the
rain-drop ploughs." Regular variation of rhyme-words ("yea" at
the end of the second line in stanzas 1 and 3, "aye" in 2 and 4) and
recurrent phrases ("Ah, no; the years O!" alternating with "Ah, no; the
years, the years") tie together the strands of each time period as the
stanzas progress and give the poem an incantatory hold on the reader's
memory.
The
poem has two of Hardy's greatest poetic visions: the contrast
between the "pet fowl" attending the breakfasters and the "white
storm-birds" in the scene of the cemetery, and the
"brightest things that are theirs" arrayed on the lawn as the family moves
house. These function as what Tom Paulin calls "visionary objects":
"They
have their ancestral associations and they are also 'brightest' -- a
rather worn adjective perhaps . . . but one which Hardy has chosen
carefully because it's instinct with their valuation of things, the
glow they put into them" (Thomas Hardy: The Poetry of Perception, p. 207).
There
is a fascinating discussion of this poem by the poets Donald Hall,
Cynthia Huntington, Heather McHugh, Paul Muldoon and Charles Simic in
the September 1999 edition of Harper's Magazine. Donald Hall opens the discussion as follows:
"I'm
happy to say this is the most beautiful poem in the English language.
The paraphrase of the poem is, "People have a lot of fun
together, especially in families, and then they get old and die."
For me the sensuous pleasure of the poem is in conflict with its
melancholy paraphrase" (47).
Overlooking the River Stour (424)
I
choose this poem because of its engagement with the simple act of rapt
attention and all that act entails. As Paulin demonstrates in the
book I quote from above, the act of looking is central to Hardy's
poetic project; and this poem both demonstrates the acuity with which
Hardy engages the world, and subjects that act of intense looking to an
ethical criticism. Recalling a moment from Hardy and Emma's life
in 1877 (see Bailey's commentary, p. 387), the poem, in another tightly repetitive structure, moves
through three stanzas in which the poet's eye dwells on details of life
on the river: the remarkable vision of swallows as "little
crossbows animate"; the moor-hen "planing up shavings of crystal
spray"; the closed kingcups dotting the meadow that "dripped in
monotonous green." And then the poem turns just as the poet fails
to;
we see him standing, situated between the river scene (mediated by the
"drop-drenched glaze" of the window) and the domestic reality to which he pays no
attention. Finally, the poet's voice comes to rest in a present
alienated from the time of the poem's events by, again, an aching sense of regret:
"O never I turned, but let, alack, / These less things hold my
gaze."
Proud Songsters (816)
This
short poem of two intense stanzas moves from another specific
observation of a natural scene -- birds in full song -- to a meditation
on the nature of identity and its material underpinnings. As it
is so short, I will quote it here in its entirety:
The thrushes sing as the sun is going,
And the finches whistle in ones and pairs,
And as it gets dark loud nightingales
In bushes
Pipe, as they can when April wears,
As if all Time were theirs.
These are brand-new birds of twelve-months' growing,
Which a year ago, or less than twain,
No finches were, nor nightingales,
Nor thrushes,
But only particles of grain,
And earth, and air, and rain.
The
initial autonomous scene of piping expands to admit the vantage point
of human consciousness of the ephemeral (which lies, perhaps, at the
root of self-consciousness) and asks implicitly what it would be to
have an unselfconscious relationship to time -- to what extent does the
"as if" of line 6 function for a bird?
The second stanza opens out
further to depict the base from which animal consciousness and human
self-consciousness arise; and what seems so remarkable to me is the
way this stanza simultaneously embraces materialism and expresses the
wonder of identity conjured from the combination of atoms. And
their recombination, as the current crop of birds will give way to the
next wave of creatures endowed with 'thrush-ness' or 'finch-ness.'
(Note Baileys' quotation of Dorothy Hoare on p. 576)
It is a poem that works by implication to cultivate a seeing anew of the strangeness of being both embodied and self-aware.
I look forward to receiving comments on this list and suggestions for others by way of email.
Philip Purchase
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